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:iconmafiee:
I love you unique style and the shine makes the character glow. I really love your choice of colors and how you put the shines in a place that isn't so awkward.


Although there are some quirks. There isn't ENOUGH shading. The dress has no shading but the tiny bump the shows the breast. I think the hair needs a little bit more shading as well.

The background is a bit bear but i guess since it's for a tutorial it's an acception.

Maybe you should change the facial expression through out all your pictures. I see that face too many times.

beautiful job on this though. i admire you sooo much
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:iconhavanese:
Thank you so much for your critique, Mafiee! I really appreciate it. :) I agree with you about everything. I'm working on your contest entry, incidentally, and I'm gonna try to implement your advice into the entry.

Actually, er, I deleted the tutorial since I didn't like it, so I guess I really have no excuse about the background... :iconotlplz: But I hope to have a new tutorial up by the end of summer!
:iconmafiee:
WHAT?@! I WAS FOLLOWING THAT TUTORIAL!dj;f;alksdjf;klasjd D":

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and a big ol yum.
:iconhavanese:
S-sorry! ^^; Here you go, I uploaded it to imageshack. [link]

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